The Songs of Eru and Melkor
Eru’s Song:
A single note, pure, bright, and
deep
Woke the vast darkness from the
endless sleep
As worlds were shaped, a light
begun
Notes, stars, love, and sun
To overcome all the hard
bitterness
A plan was woven that will
not hinder us
Through grief, sorrow, and life
that was frayed
A world full of hope for everyone
has been made
No shadows shall fall
No one shall be frightened to
call
For those who are true and need
aid
Will find that their worries will
fade
Newfound radiance and brightness
of the world
As everything has unfurled
A harmony full of purity that is
true
All life and creation belong both
old and new
Instrumental
Music: The Planets – “Venus, the Bringer
of Peace” by Gustav Holst https://youtu.be/EE6_PacCnRw?si=i17uMOPkYKwO9Mir
Melkor’s Song:
The bitter notes striking away
On the fractured ground it may
lay
As harmony unravels into dread
The world is twisted, all light
has fled
From the shattered silence, a
piercing scream
A broken reflection of a flawless
dream
Song is rusted, air is torn
Upon this now a shadow is born
The space shall fill
With shouts that drill
As beauty continues to melt away
Noise blasts and thoughts stray
Chaotic ruin that tears away hope
Removing each and every way to
cope
Defiance will come through and survive
Darkness shall loom, anger will thrive
Instrumental Music: The Planets – “Mars, the Bringer of War” by
Gustav Holst https://youtu.be/L0bcRCCg01I?si=8SVZU0-ou2JN6Yjo
In
developing the lyrics for Eru, I tried to think of various words that brought
feelings of hope, peace, joy, and beauty.
These words all reflected Eru and the ways that showed how he acts and
what he believes in. The song lyrics
show the purity of his world, creating peace while still having a strong
passion for everything he believes in. On
the other hand, when developing the lyrics for Melkor, I tried to think of the
opposite. I created lyrics that
reflected feelings of discomfort and chaos, as this goes with Melkor and the dissonance
he brings to the world. The song lyrics
show ruin and brute anger, creating a harsh and rough general sense. For the instrumental music, I chose two different
movements of a larger orchestral suite, Gustav Holst’s “The Planets.” Eru’s instrumental music would be “Venus, the
Bringer of Peace” as this song shows strong passion, while keeping everything
delicate and light. This song brings a
lot of hope and beauty, as the song sounds that it would bring joy and inspiration
to anyone that listens to it, which is how Eru seems to be as well. It also has a lot of strength in this song,
but more on the unseen side and it must be focused on more to notice, which
reminded me of Eru too. For Melkor’s
instrumental music, I chose “Mars, the Bringer of War” as this song showed a
lot of chaos and discord, with a much heavier and dark sound, just like Melkor. It was also a strong and passionate song, but
more on the angry side with more feelings of harshness. To contrast these two songs, Eru’s was much quieter
and gentler, while Melkor’s was loud and brash.
This relates to Eru and Melkor and how different they are from each
other. Both had strong songs, but in
their own ways with either providing inspiration and strength through peace and
hope, or through chaos and dissonance.
I really like these lyrics! I feel like you captured the vibe of each of the characters very well. Eru's feels very peaceful, while Melkor's does not. You did a great job!!
ReplyDeleteGustav Holst is one of my favorite music composers, good choice! The lyrics for each song are really good and fit well. Both of the songs have great flow and I love the lines, "Chaotic ruin that tears away hope, Removing each and every way to cope".
ReplyDelete- High Elf (Madison)
These are both really great and perfectly capture the intentions behind Melkor and Eru! Two lines that I really liked in Melkor’s song were, “As harmony unravels into dread” and “darkness shall loom, anger will thrive.” The lines accurately represent the discord and chaos Melkor causes. I also enjoyed how you referenced harmony in a positive way in Eru’s songs to compare Eru and Melkor’s drastically different ideas for Middle-earth. I also thought it was a good choice to select both instrumentals from The Planets!
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